Izzy712's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[JAMES AND THE CHIEF]

Improvement.

I like it. It's one of your better works. Now, just work on the lines, draw a background, and this'll go in my favorites. You're slowly improving, keep at it.

[Eple]

Mmmmm..

I love the smooth texture of the body of the apple and how well it blends in with the faded background, but I think it would be an even more delicious apple if the leaf was blended in with the body of the apple and the background. Or you could've made the outline of the apple the same thickness and darkness of the leaf. I think the stem looks good the way it is. Nice job, though. Gotta love those green apples. Faved.

[Peaceful Night]

Nice.

Well, what can I say- it's very realistic. This would work well for a background in a flash, and it would look nice as a desktop image. As Randy said, the blurring and lighting that you used on the background looks great, and adds the the picture. The only thing that I would change is the stars; they look too blotty. But, that's just my opinion, you don't have to listen to me :3

[Arfenhouse]

The picture is amazing, yeah...

But it's the fucking cat that makes me think that this picture is god's gift to NG's art portal. I hope i'm not the only one who thinks so.

[sir p-bot]

Hah.

A medieval P-Bot. I like the idea, but in my opinion, It could use some more details. Nevertheless, I like what you did with the shading, It looks very pure and smooth. A little bright, but it works here. You'll get a 9/10 from me, my good sir Ashman :3

[Just living]

This is great.

I like the grass the most, because it's very detailed, but the rest is good, too :) This looks like you have put a lot of time into it. 8/10 from me :3

[Süet The Barachaek Goblin]

Looks nice :)

Looks really nice, pleasing to the eye, and also the fact that I like your style of art :) I hope to see more from you :)

Sandling responds:

Thanks :]

[Mario]

Oh god..

If this is one of your better works, than you need to stay off of the art portal. This is just... what chillbro and perfectidiot12 described it as: BAD. Practice more, and come back in 2 years, since you're probably around 11-12.

[Kratos]

( work in progress )

It looks like Kratos, but.. it needs some work. First off, he looks fat, and i'm pretty sure that Kratos is not fat. The hands also needs working on, they look wierd and disproportionate. Also, why is there a line dividing his arm from his hand? He's not wearing a shirt. The sword's okay, but needs some work. Overall, if you take some time to put more detail, add shading,and make things more proportionate, you'd have something here that would be really good :D I'm not saying that it's bad, but it just needs some work. Score-wise:6/10 and 2/5 . Keep drawing!

Eclipse responds:

Thank you for the constructive criticism, I am currently working on refining it. I know the sword doesnt look great, Im probably gonna take the scanned picture and fix it up in Photoshop, then re-submit. Im going to make the colors darker and more lively, and remove the line separating the arm and hand, and remove the notebook lines. Im going to refine the lines and all that because they are very sketchy and un-defined.