Izzy712's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Süet The Barachaek Goblin]

Looks nice :)

Looks really nice, pleasing to the eye, and also the fact that I like your style of art :) I hope to see more from you :)

Sandling responds:

Thanks :]

[Kratos]

( work in progress )

It looks like Kratos, but.. it needs some work. First off, he looks fat, and i'm pretty sure that Kratos is not fat. The hands also needs working on, they look wierd and disproportionate. Also, why is there a line dividing his arm from his hand? He's not wearing a shirt. The sword's okay, but needs some work. Overall, if you take some time to put more detail, add shading,and make things more proportionate, you'd have something here that would be really good :D I'm not saying that it's bad, but it just needs some work. Score-wise:6/10 and 2/5 . Keep drawing!

Eclipse responds:

Thank you for the constructive criticism, I am currently working on refining it. I know the sword doesnt look great, Im probably gonna take the scanned picture and fix it up in Photoshop, then re-submit. Im going to make the colors darker and more lively, and remove the line separating the arm and hand, and remove the notebook lines. Im going to refine the lines and all that because they are very sketchy and un-defined.